Needs a pre-loader.
Sounds are a must.
Some kind of story.
And must be longer.
Apart from that, seems ok, and drawing and animation seem basic but fine, background may need some more detail though.
Needs a pre-loader.
Sounds are a must.
Some kind of story.
And must be longer.
Apart from that, seems ok, and drawing and animation seem basic but fine, background may need some more detail though.
Thanks, I really appreciate that.
and I can't really make a better animation style because this is my first real animation.
Wow, this is awesome, reminds me of Madness fight animation with the armless and legless characters, but these represent life like facial features, and sound such as speak.
Not sure if it was my laptop but the voices sounded grainy when they spoke.
Really good movie :)
Thank you for your kind words Jace.
Funny you should mention it, but I actually took inspiration from the madness combat series :)
So it's a good first attempt, random though but that's fine.
Obviously the challenge now is to improve upon it, more color and background to make it better, possible change the stick man to an actual detailed hand drawn character, and a pre-loader bar will help too. :)
Keep up the good work fella.
Cheers! I'd like to get into animation eventually, but this was really just for a bit of fun to kill a boring night. I only have MS Paint and I draw with a mouse, so stick figures are all I can do really, ha ha
So true, people would agree that Google+ is becoming this Tyrant, but not in a cool Resident Evil way.
I really like this submission, it's really good and the animation is very well done, I'm choosing to save this because more people should watch this.
It's a pity, nowadays being anonymous is harder
First of all, I'm not really sure why you named it "Failed Attempt", already you have put the submission down, it's like you have no faith in it and named it as such to either get sympathy votes, or other means.
The trailer isn't that bad, apart from some spelling, grammatical and punctual problems, as well as the music is not really fitting.
The premise of the game, though not making sense is decent.
Hopefully you can get some tips or collaberate with some people on here with an understanding and skills of flash that will help you get this idea into motion.
Yes I got u "that until - rather thing"I guess you have watched this more than once that's good and i appreciate your concern.Yup it is wrong and there's no denial .You are too kind to give me two stars for this.As a viewer you could have been more demanding about the artwork and other things, but u seemed to be satisfied with it, i feel a little nice about it now thanx :)
well
the graphics and sound were clear and amazingly portrayed, the animation was short but sweet.
-BIGJACE1
holy shit
this is so awesome, the graphics are fantantis the animation is brilliant and the sounds are perfect, it was well worth the wait.
Well thank you very much
well
5 second loop, with half decent graphics and colour, needs to be longer with sound and refined graphics/drawing, a preloader and end stop would help.
well seeing as its my first attempt, i needed to make something simple thank you very much.
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